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One of my best qualities would have to be my work ethic. I work hard on my homework and do not stop until my work is done completely and to the best of my ability. When I am at work I make sure all of my work is done before I leave for the night no matter what the time is. I believe this will help me alot in the future becuase I will have the dedication to finish all of my work in college, study hard, and get the good grades that follow hard work. Also, this will help me as I become a teacher as go about my day to day business like grading homework and making sure each student has everything they need to be the best student they can be. Having a good work ethic will also help me out in my day to day life. At home it will help me get all my chores done in a timely manner and help me teach my children to work hard in school and in life. If I didn't have a good work ethic I would not have the grades I have now or be in National Honor Society. I would most likely be a slug who sleeps during class, barely shows up, and goes home right after school, never going out of my way or pushing extra hard for that A.